Park / The Missile Crisis

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  • JDP%s's Photo
    Luigi- Thanks man

    metro- lovely feed back, thanks. as i said above, i know colors are something i have to work on and hopefully i can get better with my next release. as for the intamin giant wheel, i got the idea here. I combined the models of the "spokeless wheel" and "giant wheel on building" to get my version. and with the path on the edge, ill admit that was rushed and i ran out of ideas. this park was intended to be a design but after k0ng suggested we shoot for solos i had to expand beyond the design so that slice of the map was forced in a way. Thanks for the feedback man, looking forward to your next release as well.

    EDIT: Yeah, roomie, that was my main inspiration. Thanks for posting that, and thanks for the feedback.
    -JDP
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    Congrats on the accolade, dude!

    To be honest I wasn't a big fan. Your general ideas and the layout were pretty good, although the layout was a bit slow-paced. Some things of the theming were superb (e.g. the restrooms near the pretzel-loop), but other parts were really poor, I'm sorry.

    Looking forward to your next submission.
  • highroll3r%s's Photo
    In general this was a great release. I absolutely loved the layout, especially the pretzel. Ive never seen one executed so uniquely well. The station was fantastic too.
    However the most interesting part for me was the custom splash boats. The choice of track was perfect, the layout was amazing and the theming was superb. I beleive that the foilage could have been slightly better. The only dislike i had was the architecture, not the overall structure of buildings but the colours. I know its the theme, industrial like, but it made the buildings quite dull. Other than this though it was a pleasure viewing Missile Crisis. :)
  • Maverix%s's Photo
    I really enjoyed this, solid themeing and interesting to look at. I loved the flyer other than the pretzel, i thought the pretzel would have been better the "normal" way it is done with the s-bend at the bottom and just went straight in and out of it. There were a lot of great ideas as well such as the ferris wheel and water ride. Overall a solid silver and your best work yet.
  • CoolCody%s's Photo
    1. I really like the overall concept of this project. Very well thought out.

    2. For me I would of voted in the bronze area, Only because when I look at this, I don't get the park feeling, Its more of a really really well thought out design. Another thing, I didn't see a park entrance. Its really a downer when there;s no well themed park entrance for your park. Its like the first thing guest see when they come up to your park!(also one of the things I look for when I open a park)

    3. Another negative is that near the fliers 2nd element drop, you have jungle wooden fences keeping foliage in, the fences just didn't go along with the atmosphere.



    You have an excellent design here, but for me this isn't a silver park. When I think of a silver park, I think of a well executed Theme/Amusement park with a variety of eye catching coasters/attractions and multiple area's

    Overall, good job! hope to see more!
  • geewhzz%s's Photo
    nice job jdp, but i still stand by and think you ncso is miles ahead of your cso. i liked the park but still don't like how you combine all the objects and it just seems to clash badly.

    the Ferris wheel was great as was the flyer. good pacing on the pretzel as phatage said. the train is supposed to look like it "falls" into the pretzel at very low speeds.

    keep up the good work
  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    This is shit hot. The layout was awesome as usual. Like geewhzz said, some objects and colors just clash and it comes off as a cartoonish feel. Big step up as far as theming goes from the last design.
  • Dimi%s's Photo
    I've always disliked your use of colours and foliage, and this park is no exception. However, the execution of rides, ideas and architecture is excellent, much better than in your previous work. I enjoyed watching it.
  • RCTMASTA%s's Photo
    This is just, wow. :eek: I do agree that this would make a better Design than Silver, and to me there is a lack of foliage and that green roof is just bad color choice. But I think this could easily be implemented in a theme park-maybe you should send it to Six Flags :p

    I'd vote 70%-but just a Design vote.
  • JDP%s's Photo
    turbin- thanks

    highroller- thanks dude. funny because i hate doing water rides yet that seems to be the park favorite.

    CC- as I said above, the park is meant to be a section of a theme park rather then a park itself. thanks for the feedback

    gw- thanks gee, and i got a nsco park going now. so far it's going great

    dirt- thanks brah!

    dimi- thanks for the feedback man. that seems to be the biggest compliant about my work for years now. ill get it sooner then later

    rctmasta- i originally wanted this to be a design but after k0ng challenged me to make an actual park, it turned into my smallest silver to date

    special thanks to sammy for the logo and jusmith for the write up, both were great. Thanks again for all the comments everyone. i will say this silver thing is getting old so im hoping this to be my last one.
    -JDP
  • nin%s's Photo
    Bit late on the reply, but I felt like I should justify my vote.

    This was one of the most inspirational, fun releases in a good while. JDP, I didn't think this would ever happen, but I'm now constantly looking forward to everything you make. It's finally become fun to view your work, as it seems you've grasped the concept of immersive theming.

    Now, I do think this deserved design rather than Silver, but regardless, congrats on the accolade.
  • birthdaybrian%s's Photo
    Keep up the good work! :nod:
  • RCTNW%s's Photo
    Good stuff JDP. Good stuff indeed. Was a fun park to explore and it looks like you had fun with this one with all the stuff and ideas.

    The coaster is indeed the star of the show but would expect nothing less from you.

    I will say I prefer your cso work of your ncso work.

    Well done and I look forward to see whats next on your plate.

    James
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    Can't believe I didn't comment on this. I thought it was superb and a testiment to your progress. Your NCSO is of top quality and its fantastic to see that your architecture now matches your skill ability in coaster layouts whereas before it was lack-luster.

    I really hope you have more up your sleeve, because I'm a big fan.
  • JDP%s's Photo
    ^ya know ive been dry with motivation but comments like that are always a nice breeze of encouragement. thanks brah
    -JDP
  • Austin55%s's Photo

    JDP come back :(

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