Park / The First Avenger

  • 13-August 13
Park_2884 The First Avenger

5 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    posted 11 years ago
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    United States inthemanual Offline
    4 big offenses:

    WW/TT objects - few people can open parks with these, and even fewer parks actually look good with them.

    Border - Learn to use 8cars, and at least remove the border fence and lower the outside land, to get ride of the ugly and distracting border

    Land Textures - You used gray rock on the whole thing. Don't. It looks bad, it isn't realistic at all, and it looks bad.

    Foliage - You used a single foliage object on the whole park, and worse yet, it isn't even a complete tree. This object was meant to be used along with a trunk object to make larger trees, not to be used on it's own. It doesn't look good without the trunk.

    The theming was actually reasonably good. it was a fun little map, but there's definitely room for improvement.
    posted 11 years ago
  • colsen396%s's Photo
    colsen396 Offline
    well im a noobie so i dont know very much stuff like you experts do
    posted 11 years ago
  • csw%s's Photo
    United States csw Offline

    well im a noobie so i dont know very much stuff like you experts do

    That's quite alright...I definitely don't consider myself an 'expert', but I do know how to have fun with the game and learn new things about it every day :) Do that and you'll succeed, my friend
    posted 11 years ago
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    United States inthemanual Offline
    We were all noobies once, man. I'm just trying to give you advice to improve so you'll be less noobie next time
    posted 11 years ago
  • colsen396%s's Photo
    colsen396 Offline
    and i just downloaded 8 cars so i will be better next time
    posted 11 years ago