Screenshot / DonQuijote
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26-October 14
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Let´s Build a ThemePark [LBaTP]
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Sweet layout. I love the surroundings, although they feel pretty claustrophobic. That queue line is massively long through a bunch of buildings that could otherwise be storefronts (unless that's a dark ride in there?). I'd highly suggest working a regular path back there and starting the queue by the interlocking corkscrews and take advantage of all the buildings.
Great layout, great atmosphere. I disagree with navalin, I like the idea of having the queue line meander through the backyards of those pretty buildings. Gives it all a Renaissance feel that fits in with the Don Quijote theme. I'm excited to know what the facade of those buildings will be like. How about some windmills?
Wow, that's really nice.
I think you're an excellent NCSO guy here so I'm gonna be nit-picky:
-I'm not really seeing the Spanish theme come through, with the exception of the flag. Foliage doesn't seem Spanish
-Foliage could be better. Seems a bit random and meant to fill in areas
-Add some things to add life to the gray rooftop, like fans, pipes, etc. Just so that you don't have a giant gray thing, you know?
-The station could be better. It looks like you're playing it safe. Take a chance to spice it up and that could change the entire screen.
-I've never been a fan of those fences you're using by the paths but that's just me
All that said, there's a lot going on here I love:
-Architecture by the queue is hot
-Whatever that green roofed building is at the bottom looks promising
-The layout is excellent, especially the diagonal brake run
I'm giving it a 70%. Well done.
Pretty much what RCT2day said. I'm just not entirely sure how to better portray the spanish theme with NCSO.
Layout is decent, and I love the idea of the themed facade hiding the dark ride.
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I agree with the points made on the fence, you don't have to change the type but I think you should "pimp" it a little bit, maybe try a small brick wall and put the fence on it.
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