Screenshot / Oasis Rapids Ride

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  posted 9 years ago

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  Lotte Offline

  i really like how the queue interacts with the rapids. the building itself is pretty neat too, though i would recolour those purple beams on the tower. your foliage does need a bit more work, try clumping things up a bit more and i'd make the yellow grass green like the rest. show us more!

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  Faas Offline

  Looks really cool! Good first post! Unlike gdb (we don't agree much), I think those purple beams are actually a good choice, it breaks everything up a bit. Try to use some more brighter green on the foliage, now it looks a bit too dead, especially for foliage near water. Maybe you could also change the colour of the queue line to make it stand out a bit more, now it's hard to distinguish the queue and the building. 

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  hulkpower25 Offline

  The purple bean look good , but the section on top of the queue line I would change just the pointy section all around the ceiling

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  Chocotopian Offline

  Looks good to me, but perhaps a little top heavy with all that stone resting atop wooden posts and fences. I'd actually like to see the purple used further, perhaps in plants surrounding the rapids. Off to a great start though.

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  posix Offline

  Good effort. Reminds me of 5dave somehow.

   

  Perhaps raise the land a bit more in between some of the turns, so that you cannot overlook the whole ride. I think it'll make it more interesting.

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  Louis! Fan Offline

  Really lovely work. The little accents of colour are spot on. Well done. Big fan here.

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