Screenshot / reddit february contest

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • robbie92%s's Photo

    There's a lot of windows on most of the buildings. It's okay to leave a little more blank wall space in between them on both the sides and vertically. 

  • FK+Coastermind%s's Photo

    Interesting, atmospheric, a bit iffy on the production, but what ruins it for me is your obvious Robbie inspiration. I'm all good for "inspired by" but this is too close for me, its reads as the same elements, repositioned, and not as well made. Given you have made such improvement in the past year, i think you should be challenging yourself to come up with more fresh, unique stuff. I know you can. 

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    are you referring to the txt tower?
     

  • FK+Coastermind%s's Photo

    I'm referring to the 1st picture under "similar screens" in the sidebar. "Disney Expo Entrance Plaza." Even the site knows what's going on

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    This seems a bit more like ShoGo to me than Robbie. The NCSO habits and skills leak through a little.

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    I too find it sufficiently personalised. Sure, there are features where it's quite clear the inspiration has come from that particular screen but it's only really that one small middle portion [and the roof on the right] and even that is different in its form.

     

    Anyways, I do think that some non-windowed walls would help make the buildings look a little less 'busy' and cluttered. Intrigued to see the path layout because from this angle it looks like a dead-end.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    I'm a fan. I think it's original enough and I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product.

  • Steve%s's Photo

    Whenever I'm inside a building, I always wish "man, if only there was another window to look out of two feet away...oh". Looks good dude!

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