Screenshot / More abstract-ish stuff

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  posted 9 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  Really like the tram location, getting some Sey vibes from it which is great. I think maybe the path + light brown building combination is maybe blending together a little too much though.

   

  The lower picture is certainly intriguing. The touches of colour are very nice but context is important when determining how an area like that would 'work' so I'll hold off on critique for now.

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  navalin Offline

  You've got me thinking if maybe they should go together. Clean city on top, with the industrial/utility landscape cut through below. I love the composition of both of these individually too though.

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  ida Offline

  

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  Liampie Offline

  I don't think wood is the right texture for that building. And on the peach building the chimney's have a weird place. On a small building like this it makes sense for them to be on the side somewhere. Imagine how this would look from the inside?
  
  Good shit otherwise. You're pretty good nowadays. Glad we didn't ban you.

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  ida Offline

  
  
  Yeah, i changed the buildings texture. I didn't know what colour to use so i thought i'd just use a texture without colour and i personally find it fitting (but Stoksy won't).

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  Liampie Offline

  Lovely texture choice. Works great. There's still something off about that building though. Needs a thicker top ornament/crown moulding.

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  navalin Offline

  Okay this ties into the giant pink rock swamp area? I'm sold again. New building looks good.

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