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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    that's not bad at all, just hella messy and hella brown.

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Nice to have a new poster. Looks pretty good thus far. Try working in some color to it. Western can have red buildings, some foliage, maybe changing the color of the windows, shades etc.

  • PRMEshockzzNE%s's Photo
    looking back at it, I totally agree with you.... Gonna mess around with the colors and try and clean it up a bit
  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    western buildings can be white, gray, peach, tan, brown, red, dull purple, dull light green, etc.. try to make it feel more like a facade than a whole building, as most real western buildings are like that

  • Poke%s's Photo

    Looks cool.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Focus more on facads than the actual structure. As most buildings at theme parks are just fake facads on genaric strucutes. It will help you buidl more interesting, appealing and realistic structures.
  • RCTER2%s's Photo

    Where is "brown is a theme" tag?

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    welcome, good screen

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    Very cool.  You seem to have the western town look down pretty well, but it could use some brighter colors here and there.

  • PRMEshockzzNE%s's Photo
    Thanks for all the suggestions they really help me! I will spice up my colors and try and make my buildings more realistic (facade)...Also thanks for welcoming me to this wonderful website!
  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Surprised at the low rating in its current state; I quite like what you've got so far. Sure, it's almost Kumba level brown but the forms a quite nice and there are some nice touches [discoloured walls for the building in the foreground is well done].

     

    However, the content is really close to the map edge, which acts to its detriment. If you take the 'implied more park' route when building things near the edge then it doesn't look good if you cut off a plaza in the middle [which it appears you've done here]. It's better to be clear about where more park content 'might' be rather than just cutting it off.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    looks pretty decent. a bit brown, but its definitely on the right track.

  • PBJ%s's Photo


    Where is "brown is a theme" tag?

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Except for the color choices, i really like this. Keep it up!

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