The 5~10% votes are a little unfair, I think. While this isn't stellar and doesn't show much, you've still clearly put effort. That said, GASM has been recreated to death and I'm not sure of the purpose of the huge grey slab. You have attempted a transfer track but I think it's in the wrong place. Generally just try to have more in your screen before submitting it.
classic and climate ; ... almost ready
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