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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    comment below
  • nin%s's Photo
    Needs more finish.
  • G Force%s's Photo

    Pretty good start but man, finish something a little more though.  

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    i was excited by the quality of the thumbnail, and then i opened it and theres like nothing there.

     

    youre best work across both games IMO, but not enough of it.

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Wouter, I don't think your description for this screen answers questions in people's minds when they look at it. From the first 3 comments, members are asking why you put so little in the screen. It's a really great start, nice work, but it needs more content or to be extremely cropped.

  • csw%s's Photo

    The title of the screen speaks perfectly of the finishedness.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    The sunken fence is really nice.  Very interesting composition for the screen, even if the path was just filler.

  • Liampie%s's Photo
    What you have so far is quite nice. I think the foliage is very good actually. The only thing I would change here is the placement of the decorational columns. They should be lined up along the higher level, giving the main path a sense of grandeur, and making the lower level look like boats could actually dock there. .
  • ida%s's Photo

    I put so little in the screen because i worked on this nonstop for two hours and i felt like sharing it because i liked it a lot. I'll post another screen when it's more finished.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    It looks great without the desert of path, ie the little thumnail looka great :p
  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Do you delete the path as you go? Or had you literally just filled the entire thing with path for the purpose of not having blank land in the screen?

     

    I was just wondering what your building process was, if you delete path as you go it sounds quite interesting tbh.

  • ida%s's Photo

    I saved it before i started adding the path. I think i saved it after too so maybe i could try something like that.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    So it was literally for the screen then. Fair enough.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    He's attempting the Posix School of building.

     

    You start with a neatly ordered pile of banners, path, trees, and raised land in one corner, and then place every element exactly where it must go in order to complete the park.  You are finished when the pile, which contains precisely the number of things needed to build the park and no more or less, is empty.

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    Needs more path

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    You start with a neatly ordered pile of banners, path, trees, and raised land in one corner, and then place every element exactly where it must go in order to complete the park.  You are finished when the pile, which contains precisely the number of things needed to build the park and no more or less, is empty.



    Is that posix' way of doing things? I thought he usually started out with a map full of path like in this screen and then carved out the Arabian Market in Raindrop Riviera.
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    Hahaha

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