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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Nice! It's bigger than I expected! I guess that explains why some of your screens are a bit unfinished at times. A lot of space to fill out.
    This looks good. That yellow coaster looks awesome.

    In the future, I think you should show more of your finished areas. That way it's easier for everyone to give you feedback on your work.
    Keep up the good work.

  • battle boy%s's Photo

    OKAY. Now just I think that the tram bridge should undergo genuine change

  • battle boy%s's Photo

    May be something like this?

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  • battle boy%s's Photo

    :)

  • phann%s's Photo

    Yes, much better.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Looks nice, good for you to finish a park on such a large map.
  • PizzaWurscht%s's Photo

    its really nice to see you finishing this park, its a good thing doing that. :)

  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Good job on the bridge. Now put that much thought and effort into everything you do! Maybe make your next park smaller, but better.
  • Jaguar%s's Photo

    Concerning your tram screen, focus your screens on rides and buildings rather than on specific structures. The bridge is nice though.

     

    The scenery items are a little weird but as a whole I like this, and see a lot of potential. I'm interested in seeing that mine train coaster or that castle(?) structure.

  • battle boy%s's Photo

    Here you go: MINE RUNAWAY TRAIN - Zoom

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  • Jaguar%s's Photo

    Thank you.

     

    I'm not sure what I think that big bard with wooden supports but it's cool looking nevertheless. It really conveys the theme well.

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    The abundance of wooden supports looks pretty cool I think. Coaster looks pretty epic too!

  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    That mine train is by far the best work you've shown! Those custom supports are an interesting idea, I've never seen that object used that way before. It's just slightly too much at the moment. This screen shows a lot of promise, keep going!

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