Screenshot / The Nemic pt 2

11-February 16
Mystical Kingdom Fun Park
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posted 8 years ago
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Liampie Offline

I think this is your weakest screen yet. The foliage selection looks random, and I don't mean that as an exaggeration. The supports are awefully clumsy. Both things are not up to par to the stuff you've shown before.

For the foliage I recommend being more deliberate in what trees and bushed you're using. Think of a style and look you want and try to stick to one consistent look.

For the supports I recommend stealing from experienced builders.
posted 8 years ago
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nin Offline

#ListenToLiam
#needsmorefinish
posted 8 years ago
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chemist Offline

#ListenToLiam
#needsmorefinish

I think this is your weakest screen yet. The foliage selection looks random, and I don't mean that as an exaggeration. The supports are awefully clumsy. Both things are not up to par to the stuff you've shown before.
For the foliage I recommend being more deliberate in what trees and bushed you're using. Think of a style and look you want and try to stick to one consistent look.

For the supports I recommend stealing from experienced builders.

Yeah I feel as if I need to hit the drawing board back with foilage and supports. Those are my weak points, do you guys have any specific parks in mind? I would like to know whats a good park to learn from for supports
posted 8 years ago
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alex Offline

^ for b&m invert:
http://www.nedesigns...42/el-encierro/
http://www.nedesigns...h-gardens-asia/

http://www.nedesigns...-points-raptor/
posted 8 years ago
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Stoksy Offline

Invert supports should always be on the inside. ie for that turnaround all the supports that you've built go on the outside where the train would otherwise be. It's dangerous to have that because the connecting pieces might get in the way of train, and if they're far enough away then the support itself would not be reinforced enough to support the track.

Agree with Liam about the foliage.
posted 8 years ago
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chemist Offline

^ for b&m invert:
http://www.nedesigns...42/el-encierro/
http://www.nedesigns...h-gardens-asia/

http://www.nedesigns...-points-raptor/

Invert supports should always be on the inside. ie for that turnaround all the supports that you've built go on the outside where the train would otherwise be. It's dangerous to have that because the connecting pieces might get in the way of train, and if they're far enough away then the support itself would not be reinforced enough to support the track.

Agree with Liam about the foliage.

Okay going to look these up, and robbie always amazes me with his work. I guess I'm not worthy just yet, back to the drawing board.
posted 8 years ago
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F0ndue Offline

I'd also suggest smoothing out the entrance and exit of the helix by adding a banked turn at the beginning and a banked straigth piece at the end. It will help the flow and make it look more realistic.
posted 8 years ago
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chemist Offline

I'd also suggest smoothing out the entrance and exit of the helix by adding a banked turn at the beginning and a banked straigth piece at the end. It will help the flow and make it look more realistic.

I keep that in mind, thank you very much for your input! Tbh, I might just start all over b/c i feel like i messed up too much on this.
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Version1 Offline

You have this weird talent to use the wrong connectors on the wrong instances.
posted 8 years ago
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chemist Offline

You have this weird talent to use the wrong connectors on the wrong instances.

What you mean? Like the supports?
posted 8 years ago
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