Screenshot / Temple Sarnath

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    I think it looks great. Perfect colors.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    fantastic work

  • Steve%s's Photo
    Pretty good, overall the atmosphere is there and I really like those pink eaved roofs to get across that Asian kinda vibe. My suggestions:

    The building structurally is well done but I think you have a bit too many textures and comes across as messy. Try and keep things clean if you can!

    Same goes for the paths, I think you have one too many and I think sticking to one or two would be perfect. Especially once you relocate the fountain.
  • G Force%s's Photo

    Fantastic, shame it is so close to the edge of the map however

  • nin%s's Photo
    Yeah this is great. Love the mixture of textures and color.
  • RWE%s's Photo

    The textures are brilliant. Love this!

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Thanks all.

     

    I will definitely try that Steve, the actual texture is mostly brick but needing to add the windows meant I couldn't get the red-brick texture that I wanted [needs two wall objects]. I'll probably replace the wood path, move the fountain more centrally with respect to the temple entrance, and then add another building on the left by the water.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Very nice!

  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Stoksy, you can layer three walls if you want. You'll have to use some optical trickery. Just build the bricks one tile further into the building. Won't work for corners, but you don't have windows on corners so that's good.
  • PBJ%s's Photo

    missing a bit of black graveyard wall on the building... I guess... 

    Like the rest said to many path types... try using max 2 types.

    But a great screen... 

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    I was going to suggest placing the fountain more central to the building, but you've addressed that already. Everything else is great. I really like the foliage and the warmth given off by this. The only thing I'm not too sure on is the black railings and grey path leading into the temple. Is there not another path type more in-keeping with the tiled theme?

  • Poke%s's Photo

    It's quite beautiful although that seating area isn't too aesthetically pleasing. Clean some things up more like those orange lines don't really work and that planter in the centre of the screen isn't really necessary to me.

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