Screenshot / First CSO Park Entrance

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Jaguar Offline

  Nice job on this, it looks very clean and kind of retro.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  Too much path. Planters are a little too bare/uninteresting. Decent start though.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Bubbsy41 Offline

  Pretty nice start. You definitely have a sense of detailing. Like previously stated the planters are extremely boring adding more flowers bushes and smaller trees would greatly help out. Also the wall is also lacking detail. The enterance building is great but then the wall is missing something. Maybe add some posts like the 1/8th tile stone poles. It would really spice it up. Finally the path, it's way too much. Adding something along the lines of a fountain, parking lot, ticket gates, first aid buildings, food vendors, statue, etc would be very beneficial. Also don't be afraid to mix up the path types. Overall solid start!

  posted 8 years ago

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