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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Quite good!  Try to make the foliage a bit less clumpy perhaps, more free flowing.  Landscaping is a bit off too, try working in some more land textures and height variation in the cliffs to make it feel more natural.

  posted 8 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Agreed on landscaping; it's all pretty squared-off.  

  posted 8 years ago

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  Jaguar Offline

  Those AC unites are really cool. I like the bridge as well, although adding an arch support would make it look awesome.

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  Xeccah Offline

  you can use the tile inspector to make sure neither the gardens nor the monorail glitch, btw.

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  csw Offline

  what's this about a tile inspector? I have not heard of such tomfoolery

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  bigshootergill Offline

  Definitely some of your more promising work. Probably because it doesn't have pink rocks

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  Iron Rattler Offline

  I really love the right side of the screen with the cliffs and bridges. The left side isn't quite as good for me, but that is probably just because I hate the pirate roof

  posted 8 years ago

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