Screenshot / Sunbathing
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26-August 16
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Area around the lazy river circuit can be improved a lot, feels really rushed now. Foliage and colors are good, just need more finish and polish.
Any suggestions?
I'd continue the walls below the water some how, maybe raise the bottom of the river by 1 unit with some object as well. Most lazy rivers are very shallow. Those 3 waterfalls in the middle of the screen could use a bit more detail, right now its just a mud wall.
Maybe add some rapids objects or some fountains/jets etc.. in the path of the river to make it a bit more interesting. I'd watch a pov or look at pics of a real lazy river and try to translate some of those details to the game.
landscaping skills have gone up a nitch! nice to see you continueing on this
Thumbs up from me.
Because we like it cheap
Because I don't have that piece in other texture.
Good start.
Why wouldn't you just use the dinghy slide track for the slides?
The palm tree in the middle left looks like an odd green.
Make the land under the waterfall snowy walls, it makes it look way better imo.
shoujld change the grass where people are laying down to that brown color.
I get what you are saying, if anyone knows polynesian objects let me know. Without objects and buildings, it just looks like a tropical jungle with a lot of water(falls) (like in Port Aventura).
I really don't care if it's accurately Polynesian or not. It's tropical and nice, that's totally enough.
There's a powerful and warm vibrance in this FredD that I love. I really dislike the diagonal path though. It pierces through the perspective and looks very unnatural and wrong to me.
Just keep going, develop your parkmaking in the process. I wouldn't recommend any big changes as of now. I just think you need more routine. Perhaps focus a little bit on developing theoretical content for your parks. The screen looks slightly uninspired. Not stylistically, but on the question what attractions you are going to offer.
I like it. It definitely shows a nice tropical atmosphere, i'm maybe missing a bit of small details though to make it more interesting.
Otherwise i agree with posix about the diagonal path.
Overall I think this is some quality stuff but there are a few that are missing:
)In the top-left corner of the screen there seems to be missing a fence.
)In the bottom left corner of the screen the edge of the island is devoid of foliage, which is weird because the other sides of the island have a lot of foliage.
)The fact that the walls stop right above the water makes the screen look a lot more unfinished than it really is, Especially under the brown diagonal monorail.
This is really awesome. I suggest trying to smoothen out some of the harsh/sharp edges it has with something - like rock work or foliage. It just is a little angular when it probably shouldn't be; even the slide isn't smooth.