Screenshot / Caiman and Sapore

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Beautiful work! I'm really excited to see this finished. What % would you say the park is right now?

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Did K0ng make this?

     

    Too much brown, especially in the buildings near the top.

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Great stuff, but I can see where G Force is coming from. That goldish brown isn't really working for me.

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Idk, I think the colours from the coasters and gift racks add a sufficient amount of colour to offset the brown.

     

    I do think that your foliage is too manicured though, add some bullrushes/swamp plants in the river or alternatively have the monorail trench as a barrier but only a tile or two away from the rapids so you get a bit more of an overgrown feel.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    This is missing something and I can't put my finger on what exactly.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    A focal point?

  • G Force%s's Photo
    The park seems to be suffering from Wof syndrome. It probably looks nice in game when you can scroll around, but it doesn't make for good screenshots because it's a bit muddled together. I get your trying to save objects, but sometimes a few well placed details and variances in style can really help.

    Perhaps as well the colors are a bit basic, the foliage, archy, path, rides. Very simplistic color choices that make it seem a bit dull.
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Thanks for the feedback guys!

     

     


    Beautiful work! I'm really excited to see this finished. What % would you say the park is right now?

     

    Thanks! Probably 50% (if I'm being optimistic, lol)

     

     

     

    The park seems to be suffering from Wof syndrome. It probably looks nice in game when you can scroll around, but it doesn't make for good screenshots because it's a bit muddled together. I get your trying to save objects, but sometimes a few well placed details and variances in style can really help.

    Perhaps as well the colors are a bit basic, the foliage, archy, path, rides. Very simplistic color choices that make it seem a bit dull.

     

    I honestly did struggle with this a little bit. I've been working on the new area for awhile now and I really like it in game, but I couldn't figure out what to feature in a screenshot. I personally think it translates much better in game. Then again, if it's suffering from WOF syndrome when WOF scored a spotlight and was overall a pretty amazing park, I can live with that. lol

     

    I'll see what I can do to improve it a little though.

  • nin%s's Photo

    Least favorite screen of the park so far. Nothing particularly bad, but lacks the impact the other screens had.

    As Russ said, it's a bit too brown, lacks many micro details the other screens had (though the interior of that gift shop rocks, loving the lines of peeps), and from what we can see the rapids look a bit tame. It could be a case of WoFitis as mentioned, but it's something to look out for as you move forward.

  • historyfreak92%s's Photo

    so is this dead or still being built? it's just i like this just i like your sunset valley, & sunset vista! i'm not trying to rush you or anything! i just hope i can explore this!

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Judging by the fact the screen was only uploaded a week ago, I would assume that yes, its still being built.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    lol yup, still being built. I've added a few more details to these buildings also given the feedback.

  • historyfreak92%s's Photo

    alright ill be looking forward to it! sorry if i judged! i wasn't trying too!

  • ScOtLaNdS_FiNeSt%s's Photo
    Love the brownishness lol

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