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  • NovaRogue%s's Photo

    Needs much more life, and colour.

     

    More benches/lamps/bins. Peeps will help.

     

    Flowers and planters and rides etc etc.

     

    Good start - but needs a lot more work.

  • zlojicanel08%s's Photo

    gift me that to download

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    I agree with NovaRogue, but its simplistic style gives it a great charm that I really do adore.

  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    I'm not sure using that "build your own six flags park" scenario as a base for this project is a good idea... the entrance it comes with is pretty half-assed. You've done a good job of developing it so far, though, nice use of the pizza stall, and those ticket booths/gates look very good.

     

    The middle of the gate building looks odd with the tower roofs set so low. You could easily have made the middle part one level higher, and turned the corners into actual towers, I think that would give it a much more exciting look, with only little effort. I'm not so sure about the wall layering either, that combination of pirate wall and castle arch. Try the castle window instead of the arch! A layer of brick as a base, like on the building that looks like a church, could also benefit the gate building. 

     

    Lastly, the foliage needs work. The cypresses look out of place and generally it feels as if you just used the scatter tool to place some trees without much though involved. Some underbrush here and there would look nice! 

  • MK98%s's Photo

    Thanks a lot for this very supportive feedback. I'll make some changes. Foliage needs work indeed, gotto work on that.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    Soooooooooo much path - try to break it up with some planters!

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