Screenshot / Tomb Raider and the Skull River

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  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Looks similar to the disaster bench. You created a jungle-y vibe here, well done. The various objects you've strung together compliment quite nicely. Those rock pathways can be tough to fit into the right scene, but they work great here!

     

    Trying to figure out where the water goes from the waterfall, it should keep flowing somewhere, perhaps another angle shows it.

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Reminds me a lot of the disaster bench... Looks really promising, rockwork is fantastic, architecture could be a little bit clearer, the skull, as being the center piece of this, could be more detailed.

     

    I agree about the waterfall! Hope you're gonna do all the angles on this one, cause it has so much potential!

  • Julow%s's Photo

    Thank you guys for the comments, nice to have some feedback.

     

    perhaps another angle shows it.

     

    Perhaps, haha.

     

    Yeah I started with the new Louis 2017 bench and after picking some objects I endend up with something very similar to the disaster bench haha.

     

     


    the skull, as being the center piece of this, could be more detailed.

     

    I agree about the waterfall! Hope you're gonna do all the angles on this one, cause it has so much potential

     

    Finally I'm probably deleting the skull and changing the name of the ride and I will finish the waterfall next time! 

  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    This is amazing. I'm looking forward to see more of it! Is it a complete park or just a design?

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    This reminds me of Kukuana, and that's a great thing. More than the skull, I think the archy needs work. It's not bad at all, but it's not as good as the area deserves. The green dome looks really lazy and ugly. The brick blocks you used make for a great wall texture, but they're not as great as a roof texture. Especially the row of brick walls around the green dome building, they make the building too wide anyway. The buildings don't need more detail, but they need more refinement, which you can achieve through adding more details. Does that make sense?

     

    Anyway, keep going, and build from all four angles. You're onto something

  • posix%s's Photo
    What you guys call a disaster bench to me looks way better than anything else.
     
    Julow, this is wonderful. Great devotion to theming, nicely embedded drop. You've given a lot of love to the ride - it's very nice to see. And your talent is omnipresent in all your screens.
     
    What type of project is this?
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    Because you said so in Discord; I would highly suggest working on the other view angles at the same time. People are going to notice and it would be a shame for something this cool to end up "unfinished" - yes it takes longer and yes it's more effort, but it's really painful to watch things like this end up like that.
  • Julow%s's Photo

    This is amazing. I'm looking forward to see more of it! Is it a complete park or just a design?

    Thank you a lot, for the moment it's just a ride, but I will probably build a coaster next to it!

     

     


    This reminds me of Kukuana, and that's a great thing. More than the skull, I think the archy needs work. It's not bad at all, but it's not as good as the area deserves. The green dome looks really lazy and ugly. The brick blocks you used make for a great wall texture, but they're not as great as a roof texture. Especially the row of brick walls around the green dome building, they make the building too wide anyway. The buildings don't need more detail, but they need more refinement, which you can achieve through adding more details. Does that make sense?

    I totally agree with you, to be honest I rushed archy because I wanted to build more and more vegetation but I will focus on it next time, thanks for the advices!

     

     


    What you guys call a disaster bench to me looks way better than anything else.
     
    Julow, this is wonderful. Great devotion to theming, nicely embedded drop. You've given a lot of love to the ride - it's very nice to see. And your talent is omnipresent in all your screens.
     
    What type of project is this?

    This is so heartwarming, thank you! So glad you're enjoying it. This is probably something I will keep to myself but I will maybe share screenshots and the park file for those who are interested on discord when finished.

     

     

     

    Because you said so in Discord; I would highly suggest working on the other view angles at the same time. People are going to notice and it would be a shame for something this cool to end up "unfinished" - yes it takes longer and yes it's more effort, but it's really painful to watch things like this end up like that.

     

    We already had a long discussion about this but thank you for your appreciation, maybe someday I will go back to old habits and work on other angles! :p

     

    @all Thanks for the constructive comments!

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