Screenshot / Yankee Thunderbolt & Cannonball

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  • Louis!%s's Photo

    lovely, really nice composition

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    You're making progress! The placement of the coasters is pretty nice  but maybe you can colour the supports of the steel coaster something else than white? The woodie is already white, if both are white it looks a bit dull. Also sttill not a fan of some of the tree colours though. The birches should all have grey trunks and the lighter, fuller green. I can see now that's not the case for all of them.

     

    Now on to the fun part: breathing life into it! Adding benches, ligths, stalls, bins, peeps...! Keep building! :)

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    by far the best work that you have shown us

  • chemist%s's Photo

    getting better

  • Bubbsy41%s's Photo
    Looks very charming. The turn around on the arrow is much too drawn out and flat IMO. Also the path could use some life. I.e. Tables, food carts, small buildings etc
  • trav%s's Photo

    This is nice! I'd love to see some little food carts or an ice cream stand added along here.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    Interaction is great; foliage needs a bit of improvement as Jappy said and definitely some life as Jappy, Bubbsy, and trav pointed out.
  • RWE%s's Photo

    Great to see your in an improvement process. Not bad stuff! Now give it some life and make it interesting!

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Its weird that the coaster goes from Corkscrews directly into breaks. Needs a hill or turn or something between those elements.

    Also, the diagonal supports should be evenly spaced, currently it seems you just put them wherever.
  • IonZer0%s's Photo

    Yeah, maybe move the corks before the turn or add a helix, but keep this version just in case.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    you also need at least one flat piece between the corkscrews, especially when you're taking the piss in the lead up like that

  • Merzbow666%s's Photo

    I'd love to sit on that bench in the middle and watch the coaster over the lake. Very quaint.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    id rather something original rather than a try to build in vogue but it turns out blatantly unoriginal honestly. Besides that the turn is too big
  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    id rather something original rather than a try to build in vogue but it turns out blatantly unoriginal honestly. Besides that the turn is too big
    it's not unoriginal? Yeah it's pretty plain but give me specifics otherwise, there's not really much I can do about it
  • dr dirt%s's Photo


     

     

    it's not unoriginal? Yeah it's pretty plain but give me specifics otherwise, there's not really much I can do about it

     

    It just looks like it was built without much prior vision.  Almost like it's built just to use the patchy foliage w/ 1k rocks look and the paths with only curbs for fences.  It looks fine and all, I just wish it had some expression with your own style if that makes sense.

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