Screenshot / Ogopogo

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  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    Hehe I know why this image is cropped, but i'll never tell *wink* But seriosuly, good job. Kinda wish the supports were thicker though

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    The road lines as supports is an interesting choice... And I don't think it's really working for me.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    You're missing a support piece right where the drop goes steep.

     

    Rest is nice, not really much to complain about other than the relative unfinishedness.  Perhaps the fact you use 2 different roof types on that building, I'd probably just swap out the steel ones there for something that blends in a bit more.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    Very Nice!
  • Austin55%s's Photo

    lovel

  • Mr.Brightside711%s's Photo

    You could probably get rid of the cross tie road lines on the parts that are 3 squares long with no vertical pieces.

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    Nice first drop? I guess it's a teaser so I can't complain about the content but it is just a lift hill and a drop. I do want to see more though, because it does look good. just wish there was more.

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Ogopogo is from my neck of the woods... what prompted you to use that name?

     

    As for the screen, I would have liked to see a little more content, but what's there is basically good.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Supports need work, the road lines don't work IMO, and you're missing a lot of support structure.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    This park looks promising from what I've seen from it, but I don't understand why you showed this angle. it's literally a lift, turnaround and the back of a building. I think you can take a lot more interesting screens from what you've got so far. 

  • G Force%s's Photo

    I think the road lines are fine, perhaps just needs some trim on the lines parallel to the track or even some horizontal cross bracing as well.  Something to beef it up a bit, as they do seem a bit flimsy right now.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I think the road lines are fine, perhaps just needs some trim on the lines parallel to the track or even some horizontal cross bracing as well.  Something to beef it up a bit, as they do seem a bit flimsy right now.


    Right now I think they don't look good because they look flimsy lol

    I also think it could use some more vertical supports on the lift, potentially.
  • posix%s's Photo

    Love the colours.

  • historyfreak92%s's Photo

    sort if reminds me of cyclone at dream world australia!

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