Screenshot / Thunderbolt & B&M (redo)

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    It's a shame that the loop is so far back from the pathway; it seems to be missing out on some great sight lines.

    Foliage could use some tweaking; I'm not the best at it myself, but a lot of people recommend checking out pac as his foliage seems to have purpose in every object placement.

    Floorless color choice is great!
  • GigaG%s's Photo

    The go-kart board seems to be advertising some pretty interesting services.

  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    I don't think I want to sit down in those go karts

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    It's almost incredible how quickly you're improving.

  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo


    It's almost incredible how quickly you're improving.

    I dunno. I guess something clicked. Still can't figure out a lot of stuff still 
  • trav%s's Photo

    You've got a good base here, time to add some little details to bring it to life. 

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    Could maybe throw some additional detail into the wooden supports; footers, metal crossbars where the gokarts go under, that kind of thing.
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    [ntamin22' timestamp='1493071292' post='720387'] Could maybe throw some additional detail into the wooden supports; footers, metal crossbars where the gokarts go under, that kind of thing.

     

    This will help add to the detail.

     

     I think that, along with foliage refinement, a bit of composition improvements, and adding life is what your work needs.

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