Screenshot / Bamboo's Oriental Express & De Dans van de Geisha's

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  • biZarRo%s's Photo

    Looks great, although to make the coaster stand out more, I suggest making the track yellow and the supports a darker red.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Great screen! I love the coaster, one of the best kiddies I've seen in a while.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    that is quite good, although I'm not convinced with the roofs- so many colors starts to look cluttered. If I was going for a more realistic theme, I'd stick to black/brown and maybe a bit of green, depending on context (I think the color of roofs actually is related to a building's purpose in China, but I don't know much). The entrance is a great building but doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the architecture, seems more like an old American building.

     

    Overall, each part is very good and detailed, but it doesn't quite have cohesion.

     

    edit: on second look, I don't quite understand which asian country you chose as the theme, but it looks more chinese so we'll go with that (china/japan/etc are all actually very different)

  • tdub96%s's Photo

    I like this a lot. You did a really nice job with that layout, staying Schwaz-esque while making it family oriented. The architecture is also very good, although there may be a bit too many colors as Cocoa said. 

     

    Despite the unfinishedness, I'm giving this an 80%. I'm really digging it.

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    The temple that the coaster flys through looks so good

  • csw%s's Photo

    Really nice work. I love the rockwork and waterfall in the bottom left, and the station building is great as well. 

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