Screenshot / Time Bandit [GCI]

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 10 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  I like this a lot. Part of me feels like the monorail is too high, but if nobody else agrees then ignore that part as I'm far from an expert on scale.

  posted 10 years ago

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  Austin55 Offline

  looks very steve which is nice

  posted 10 years ago

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  Recurious Offline

  I agree with Coasterbill, I think the monorail is to high ,unless there will be something under it like buildings or something like that. The rest looks nice

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  PizzaWurscht Offline

  thanks for feedback 

  posted 10 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  I must agree with Coasterbill here, lower that monorail. Also, some diagonals on that crazy paving path (I assume that's the queue) would do a world of good for this screen.

   

  Other than that, looks nice; although I'm not entirely sure what's going on with the grey brick on the station. It looks glitchy and out of place (maybe a thinner object would be better?), although it works on the transfer housing.

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  AvanineCommuter Offline

  The feel of the queue is wonderful. 

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  posix Offline

  It's good. You have a macro gene in you that I like. You need more practice and finished projects under your belt to boost your development. Focus on what your feeling tells you is the right choice for objects and go with it. Don't be disencouraged if you create something that doesn't please you. It's part of the process.

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