Park / Falcon

15 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
  • Xtreme97%s's Photo
    Big congrats on another accolade!
    This was very good. Alot of nice details and ideas such as the camp fire in front of El Rio Loco's entrance. The architecture was balanced and the ride interaction was good. Your landscaping and foliage has definately improved, good job on that.
  • Fisch%s's Photo
    Congrats on the design!

    It was very nice and I did like it but there were some parts that with just a little more thought would've been better.

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    The foliage was quite nice but some parts like those trees in the upper corner of the map felt inferior to other parts.
    The pacing, though this might have had to do with my laptop, felt a little slow for some of the inversions.
    The entrance sign and the photo shop just felt extremely rushed.
    There's no mcbr but yet there are 3 trains on the track. Not very likely to happen.

    Apart of that I thought it was very good. I liked the little plaza with the fire in the middle and most of the facades.

    One thing you should improve in my opinion though is your layouting for the whole map. I don't mean the ride design but rather the whole concept and composition could be a lot better in my opinion.

    Again congrats and good luck for your future projects!
  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    I agree with Fisch to a point.

    The path layout was pretty good but for a few places.

    The coaster was good but was slow to start ( make a 5ft drop before the first innelman).

    The theming was great. colors brought it out the southern/western look.

    The supporting ride IMO was the best part. I liked how it interacted with the coaster and how you made it an important Part.

    Well deserved design, If I were to vote, abt a 15/16

    I really liked the risk involved. It wasn't like a normal design where half the coaster is all by itself, and your risk paid off.
  • olddtfan51%s's Photo
    Great looking park I was amazed. :mantis:
  • rct2isboss%s's Photo
    Mav.....I love you <3

    I thought the ride was great although the pacing was just a little off. I loved the architecture and atmosphere from the buildings. The fire pit and the rapids ride were splendid as well. There is just one other thing Mav....STOP BUILDING DESIGNS AND MAKE MORE PARKS. Seriously your work is so good but I just want to see more parks like OPC. We all know you can churn out designs left and right so just build another park. I loved this design and its definately one of my favorites from you second to Cheetaka. Keep up the work though.
  • hulkpower25%s's Photo
    Amazing work, nice layout and good themeing.
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    overall a very nice design! there is certainly a good atmosphere in parts of this, and some of the architecture is quite good. In a couple places I feel like you added details for the sake of details, and not in ways that looked aesthetically pleasing or realistic. Just to make it look like you can use details. Also, I felt like you made the map a bit too big in parts, and there was just a bunch of blank space.

    But good job, you're definitely improving, and congrats on the design :D
  • Roomie%s's Photo
    I loved this (which i guess is shown by my score) enjoyed the realistic style which managed not to feel as horrendously sterile as I've found some recent releases. This design along with stingray was a big part of why i badgered K0ng to get you in H2H :)
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    ^yeah and in the process of badgering to get him into h2h you stopped him from building on our duo!! lol
  • Roomie%s's Photo
    Awww poor Louis! :p

    I thought you just needed the extra time to build in H2H... I was doing you a favour really.
    In time you will understand :)
  • That Guy%s's Photo
    I think it was a great improvement from your previous things. It felt like you were trying more things and it showed. I enjoyed the theme and the foliage was nice. As far as the coaster goes, it was pretty cool but the flow stops right after the barrel roll near the station. I stand by my vote but this was still excellent. (Great logo as well)
  • Corkscrewy%s's Photo
    my ooooonly complaint is the 3 trains. 2 would've been the perfect number and reduced stacking. other than that man, I really do love your work and would love to see a whole park from you very soon. Also, I must comment on the catwalk.. fucking brilliant for a wingrider. :mantis:
  • BigB%s's Photo
    Congrats to your accolade :)
  • FK+Coastermind%s's Photo
    This was pleasant. Very well done and enjoyable, though nothing mind-blowing here, but still a deserving design. Congrats!

    FK
  • Scoop%s's Photo
    great ride. loved it.