Park / Lenroth Enclave

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  posted 2 years ago

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  Lurker Offline

  I liked the dark and gloomy atmosphere in this park, a lot of gritty textures as well. Also, the coaster supports, I don't think I've seen those objects used before, interesting. Overall, Definitely one of my favorites from that contest.

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  I liked the dark and gloomy atmosphere in this park, a lot of gritty textures as well. Also, the coaster supports, I don't think I've seen those objects used before, interesting. Overall, Definitely one of my favorites from that contest.

  
  
  Thank you!

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  I found this pretty enjoyable. Super atmospheric, aided by the palette, which I think works with the colours and textures well in a way some palettes don't. The coaster is pretty nicely made, with cool supports. Don't really love the weird s-shaped curve after the zero-g roll, nor the placement of the loop being hidden between two buildings, but the rest flows pretty well between the elements. The recolourable ncso thing kind of bothers me because it holds the park back in some places, such as the use of the grey bullrushes where a smoke object would have worked much better. Guess that's down to the contest restrictions. The archi overall is pretty great however, good variety of textures but still feels cohesive.

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  I found this pretty enjoyable. Super atmospheric, aided by the palette, which I think works with the colours and textures well in a way some palettes don't. The coaster is pretty nicely made, with cool supports. Don't really love the weird s-shaped curve after the zero-g roll, nor the placement of the loop being hidden between two buildings, but the rest flows pretty well between the elements. The recolourable ncso thing kind of bothers me because it holds the park back in some places, such as the use of the grey bullrushes where a smoke object would have worked much better. Guess that's down to the contest restrictions. The archi overall is pretty great however, good variety of textures but still feels cohesive.

  
  
  Aye, the loop was not as hidden early on building this, and is something I do regret sticking through with.
  
  And wholeheartedly agree that the smoke i this case, could have been replaced. Either with crashed vechicle trickery or me being able to locate an object in time.
  
  I appreciate that you like the textures!
   

  Thanks man =)

  posted 2 years ago

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  Really great atmosphere, I pretty much agree with Xtreme in that there are a few weird quirks here and there which are noticeable, but don't overly detract from the park as a whole. Love these kind of spooky parks, so I'm happy to see this!

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  Terry Inferno Offline

  Building shantytowns in RCT requires finding a difficult balance between cohesive and ramshackle, and you've pulled it off quite nicely here. Occasionally there is one wooden post or steel fence too many, but overall, the use of textures is thoughtful and helps sell the theme; even if you did not tell us which time period this is meant to represent, we would be able to figure it out largely based on your architectural choices, many of which are subtle but still distinctly late 1700s.

   

  Most of the questionable object choices are a result of a restrictive bench, but you've managed to make it work well enough despite the limitations. I particularly enjoy the shapes you create with flowers and rocks on water. Keep doing that!

   

  The coaster itself pops better when painted one shade lighter; it blends in a bit too well with the dark surroundings currently. S-curve notwithstanding, it's a very nice layout, and the scene as a whole becomes more readable when the coaster and the buildings are more distinguishable. The loop may be hidden, but in a spooky scene such as this one, a secret loop is not necessarily out of place. 

   

  You're developing a style that is instantly recognizable as your own. Looking forward to seeing more distinctly Wacked parks!

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  Wacked Offline

  Really great atmosphere, I pretty much agree with Xtreme in that there are a few weird quirks here and there which are noticeable, but don't overly detract from the park as a whole. Love these kind of spooky parks, so I'm happy to see this!

   

  Thank you kindly! It'd be cool to know which choices I could have done differently with what was given =)

   

   

  Building shantytowns in RCT requires finding a difficult balance between cohesive and ramshackle, and you've pulled it off quite nicely here. Occasionally there is one wooden post or steel fence too many, but overall, the use of textures is thoughtful and helps sell the theme; even if you did not tell us which time period this is meant to represent, we would be able to figure it out largely based on your architectural choices, many of which are subtle but still distinctly late 1700s.
   
  Most of the questionable object choices are a result of a restrictive bench, but you've managed to make it work well enough despite the limitations. I particularly enjoy the shapes you create with flowers and rocks on water. Keep doing that!
   
   
  You're developing a style that is instantly recognizable as your own. Looking forward to seeing more distinctly Wacked parks!

   

  Shantyyyyy! And yessir,  late 1700's towards 1800's was a goal, but forgot to look up historical buildings early on xD
   
  Aye, I do like lots of macro layers. But It was toned down from what I practiced building before this. Also having fewer trackitecture-roofs helped this park.
  
  I do like placing the flowers to become beds of vegitation so glad it is appreciated ^^

  posted 2 years ago

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  ottersalad Offline

  Damn! Really sorry I didn't check this out sooner. Really love the vibe here. Very ramshackle and detailed village. The coaster weaves through it beautifully. I agree with Terry that it could've been a bit brighter as it would stand out spectacularly. Oh well! Either way, I love everything from the map edges, to the archy around Bodyscrambler, and the rocky waters edge. Great stuff as always. I really enjoy your style. 

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  Cocoa Offline

  grats on the design.

   

  I like this, it actually reminds me in a weird way of fisch's old invert design... thats a deep cut lol.

   

  the station is excellent and the gloomy harbour shores are great too. the layout kind of gets awkward from the zero-g onwards, but mostly works in the environment. cool stuff, very lively

  posted 2 years ago

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