Park / Young Plaza

6 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    comment below
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I'm a sucker for waterparks; so this was a fun concept. Really interesting combination of CSO and NCSO building techniques; I think unfortunately in places it comes off a bit chaotic and incongruent - but in general, it's a really fun little submission.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Your attempt to create waves in the wave pool was very admirable and quite entertaining to watch.  Some other great hacks/clever ride usage too, overall a pretty solid waterpark.

  • Xtreme97%s's Photo

    This was really cool. An odd blend of vanilla objects with custom scenery but it creates a cool aesthetic. Lots of fun object usages ranging from neat to wild, like the big wagon wheel as a clock or the dive machine trains as pool waves and wooden trains as a conveyor belt. I find the whole park to be conceptually unique as well, with the water park fully existing on the roof of these buildings. Just a ton of fun to be found in the park and quite a refreshing map. The somersaulting shark just made me laugh at the audacity lol.

  • wheres_walto%s's Photo

    This was a really interesting little park, here's some thoughts

     

    + effective on a macro level, I like the inclusion of city streets for context, and particularly love the outward facing details like the aquarium windows, clocks, and especially the red curtains

    + I actually really like your combination of CSO and NCSO styles, if I were any good at NCSO I'd definitely work similar approaches into my own parks

    + you've got a really keen sense for small details, things like minigolf fire escapes, the gas station, even the little dolphin mosaic on the performance stage

    + some of your techniques are just so clever: the wave pool, moving chain lift, not everything is effective but I certainly applaud the creativity and experimentation

     

    - it almost looks to me like your style evolved while building this, like it started NCSO but sought to escape those limitations for some things. I think the mashup is interesting but doesn't make for perfect cohesion

     

     

     

    This to me deserves a Bronze or low Silver and it makes me very curious what your next project might look like

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    congrats on the bronze. this is a fun kind of ncso/cso mashup, with a lot of life and vibes. the waterpark was especially fresh and bright, i'm a sucker for indoor spaces

  • Astroturd%s's Photo

    Lots of fun ideas and enjoyable to explore. One thing that stood out is the high level of detail in some place with a lower level elsewhere. It seems to me you are getting comfortable with custom scenery pieces. 

     

    It's clear you had a good vision, and are an improving builder. I look forward to a next release which will surely show continued improvement.