Screenshot / Mars One

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  BelgianGuy Offline

  I think you could go a bit more overboard with this, support work is decentbut the rockwork is a little too flat, try having it more extreme in places

   

  Also I don't really get why you'd mix in those tracks without any real purpose...

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  csw Offline

  ^I completely agree. You really have to sell the theme, as I learned with Miasma

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  Lotte Offline

  the rockwork is definitely a good idea, it would probably spice things up a bit. as for the coaster tracks, simply because i think they look good together and make this a bit more unique, and afterall it's fantasy so i don't have to apply to too much real life rules

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  Stoksy Offline

  I don't know; I kind of like it...

   

  Sure, you haven't really gone 'all out' with it, but I definitely think that this certainly portrays the idea that you were going for. Just put like a space-base/outpost on top of the outcropping instead of simply having landscaping. 

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  Milo Offline

  Terraformed Mars? I'm excited. I'd go for more rockwork and try to go all out on the alien landscape idea.

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