Screenshot / British Seaside Town

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  posted 10 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  Other than the unfortunate lack of texture (all the buildings are basically flat and white) there are some nice things here. It's a seafront place, and yet all the buildings are really clean; surely with the sea breeze they would be slowly crumbling. At least they'd be made out of brick or wood or something like that. [the vines are a nice start]

   

  Really not a fan of the underground queue. It just randomly appears in the middle of the street(?), there's no grand "this is the queue for the ride" it's just...there. I think it would look a lot better if you rework the queue line so as an absolute minimum it starts at the end of street. At least that would allow a much better introduction to the ride.

   

  The bridge is kind of cool and I like some of the details you've started add on the wharf (like that ladder and the vines).

   

  I personally dislike the green and blue colour combination on the coaster, but that's just me...decent start.

  posted 10 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  It's cute, and the building styles (except brick tower at the end) are very british.

   

  I do think there is a lack of texture, and the buildings are very flat faced. Try adding some detail, some window sills, shutters, drain pipes, all this will add depth to the buildings.

   

  Good start!

  posted 10 years ago

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  trav Offline

  Oh man I should find Clovelly again. 

   

   

  My main issue with this is the lack of texture and it just doesn't look particularly British. Or not a place that would have a big B&M roaring through it anyway.

  posted 10 years ago

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