Screenshot / Le vol du Gorge

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • FredD%s's Photo

    Started with this:

     

    FUCK12.jpg

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Much better man! Genuinely a good screen and the landscaping makes a lot more sense! 

    Edit: I don't like the umbrella colouring, doesn't make sense. 

  • FredD%s's Photo

    The umbrella's are colored like the flag of France, so I do think they make sense :p  I thought it'd be a funny detail.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    It's not the fact that you used red, white and blue for the umbrellas, but the way you used those colours. Why don't the fringes underneath match the colour of the umbrella above? Now I'll stop nitpicking ;)

  • PBJ%s's Photo

    much better man!

    I love to work with 1/4 bb ground blocks for landscaping

  • Brunooo%s's Photo

    yes yes much better!

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    there you go. right track for sure.

  • ScOtLaNdS_FiNeSt%s's Photo

    10x better 

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Agree with everyone.

     

    The custom 'V' looks a little odd though, I think it would just look better if you got rid of it and just used the normal sign. It's not a ride sign so it isn't required in my opinion.

  • PBJ%s's Photo

    Agree with everyone.
     
    The custom 'V' looks a little odd though, I think it would just look better if you got rid of it and just used the normal sign. It's not a ride sign so it isn't required in my opinion.


    Thats not a V it's a M from mistral...
  • FredD%s's Photo
    It was a 'M' from Mistral in the previous version. But that was wrongly placed ;) Now it is a 'V'.

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