Screenshot / first verxion of tempesto's station

screen_2112 first verxion of tempesto's station

17 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 9 years ago
  • Psi%s's Photo
    United States Psi Offline

    How are you dealing with the object limit?

     

    It's nice I guess, maybe a bit too busy but I like it.  Shit though, just finish this Coupon.

    posted 9 years ago
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    Korea, Republic of turbin3 Offline

    Too busy and too many colours.

    posted 9 years ago
  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    Netherlands chorkiel Offline

    Very nice screen. I agree with turbin3 though. I'd try changing the orange on the tempest sign and the blue of the track. The blue is kind of hurtful for the eyes atm.

    posted 9 years ago
  • theflowdiskord%s's Photo
    United Kingdom theflowdiskord Offline

    too blue of a track I rec but everything else is sick

    posted 9 years ago
  • trav%s's Photo
    United Kingdom trav Offline

    I think the colours are fine.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Austin55%s's Photo
    United States Austin55 Offline

    I agree to busy. 

    posted 9 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline
    Way too busy and complex. Don't like any of it.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Coupon%s's Photo
    United States Coupon Offline

    Any suggestions on how to fix it then?

    posted 9 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Online
    Remove the white tanks and the catwalks beside it. If it was just the red building with the shit on top, and with some open space in front, all the details would have a lot more space to breathe. Still doesn't fix some of the clashing colours. The coaster's colours stand out like a sore thumb and I can't say I like the green umbrella either.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Austin55%s's Photo
    United States Austin55 Offline

    I'm not really sure what the theme is? 

    posted 9 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Online
    I guess something industrial. It reminds me of some of the warehouses and power plants in GTA V. This screen would make a good GTA V Deathmatch map.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    United States Coasterbill Offline
    I like this. Don't forget a transfer track though.
    posted 9 years ago
  • robbie92%s's Photo
    United Kingdom robbie92 Offline

    Why do all the roofs have to be lined with catwalks? It'd be cleaner if you left some rooftops untainted.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    Australia Cocoa Offline

    I actually love it. has a great atmosphere, and certainly more interesting than some of your other work

    posted 9 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Online

    Why do all the roofs have to be lined with catwalks? It'd be cleaner if you left some rooftops untainted.


    Do my eyes deceive me?
    posted 9 years ago
  • dawidox%s's Photo
    Germany dawidox Offline
    When will BLAP be finished? Hopefully before BGA?
    posted 8 years ago
  • Coupon%s's Photo
    United States Coupon Offline

    college is really bogging me down atm.. it'll be finished during my thanksgiving break hopefully

    posted 8 years ago

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