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  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    You're actually pretty great at making architectural forms. The lack of a little detail and refinement makes this feel less immersive than how it can look. I'm not saying to go for a lot, but a little helps, even in NCSO. Another thing to look out for is color cohesion, as right now expecially a lot of your trim colors and textures don't compliment adjacent buildings. A good example is the green/brown metal trims, which don't fit the theme or feel at all.

     

    I don't like the abrupt theme change nor do I think having that much roof is anywhere near realistic.

  • J. Taylor%s's Photo

    Thanks again for the useful comment. I always find it difficult to find more detailing in NCSO, without looking overcrowded and incoherent. I used the metal trims to experiment for a little variation but I agree they might not have been the best choice for this theme. The park is almost finished so I'll try to release it soon!

  • G Force%s's Photo
    I'd maybe add some foliage or Egyptian rocks under the water to break it up a bit, seem like a big blank space now and distracts from the architecture.
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Very nice... but some asshole put a garbage can on your train tracks. ;)

  • J. Taylor%s's Photo


    Very nice... but some asshole put a garbage can on your train tracks. ;)

     

     

    It must have been there for ages, how on earth didn't I notice. Thanks for pointing it out to me ;)

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