Screenshot / Westfield Valley Amusement Park
-
11-October 15
- Views 1,281
- Fans 0
- Comments 7
nedesigns
- Copyright © 2002-2024 New Element Designs
-
Community Forum Software by IP.Board
Oooh, this is really nice! Those towers at the entrance building and first archway are very cute, and I like the planters you've used to break up the path. I'm getting some sense of inconsistency with the tress though, in that some portray an oak forest style, others seem more exotic. The three trees on the left are an example of this. I'm not sure which ones to suggest, but I'd suggest playing around a bit to find types that suit each other better, or else just stick to fewer tree types. A very pleasant area nonetheless.
Quite a nice start here, although I feel the buildings could use backstage areas, kind of weird how they just are all out in the open like that. The rest is really nice, just needs a little more refinement which will come in time.
reminds me of J K's work. nice!
This is looking very nice. I don't think you need to worry about backstage areas, just make sure the wall on the back is not so plainly visible. some foliage will do the trick.
I do think that the 3x1 tower on the top right of the screen looks a bit awkward.
Thank you all guys for the loving support! And yeah, It looks a bit off right now cause I didn't get to work on that part just yet. I've been working on the entrance once you walk in. If I put the screenshot on a different angle you can see I have doors and stuff to get into the buildings.
The actual entrance gates/booths are pretty good, but the large buildings aren't quite as interesting. They just don't do enough for me; ambiguous purpose combined with relatively uninteresting facades.