Screenshot / My first Screenshot
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01-November 15
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Hello and welcome!
Very promising, and a very good start! You've certainly got potential.
Here a my personal tips:
-Change the dark green from the rooves to a different colour, perhaps a different shade of green. It's not that pretty.
-I see you've used different colours of green on your trees. Very good! But maybe experiment a bit more. For instance, the brown bark on the birch doesn't really fit.
-I don't think that white type of fence really fits a medieval park. Consider changing the colour, or replace it with a more fitting one.
-Foliage could be improved, but since that's not really my strong point, I'll leave that to other people to help you with.
Apart from these issues, I think you'll do well here. Your buildings are solid and interesting. With a bit of added details this will be brilliant.
Yeah, for a first screen this is really, really good! Glad to see a new member starting up.
First off, it's great to see you posted a full screen, not bits and pieces of an unfinished area. You have really nice variety of buildings, archways, rides, nice use of various elevations. Well done.
To add to Jappy:
- Naturally this comes in time, however your foliage could be improved. Birch trees usually have silver bark, and the other trees should be the lighter brown bark, and the palm doesn't really fit. Try to make your foliage thicker, especially with the bushes. It's good to have dense foliage and other places would be just grass or open space.
- The green roof is a bit too bright
- You've added nice extra details with the fire, canons, flags etc, the more details you add will bring the park to another level. And more details to the buildings, such as having some bricks sticking out to show variation and depth.
Sometimes new members take the wrong idea from the tips we've given you (and others will give). It's only meant to help you improve the great skills you've already shown. Take it with the right attitude and you'll love that you did!
RMM Offline
very, very cool stuff. keep building.
... BUT!
To add to the growing list of critiques to make your work indistinguishable from everybody else's:
- actually, don't listen to a damn thing you hear.
- keep building exactly what you want to and how you want to.
Superb work. Welcome!
Sephiroth Offline
Needs a like button. And a favorite button.
before i even saw the other replies i was going to make one like RMM's
Change the path maybe, so much grey. Bricks or any tile path will probably work better here.
Nice stained glass window! I feel that the orange of the flowers is really complimenting the grey too. I'd like to see some more of that. I'm interested in seeing the rest of the coaster, as it looks like it's got some great interaction with the scenery.