Screenshot / Mediterranean boardwalk

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Like the beach, architecture and the promenade, don't like the roofs. Make the colours a bit more random, that's the point of that object. Now it's too organised.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    I'm not sold on the wall textures. I think the cleaner non-mud ones would work a lot better with the sort of style you have (of course add some crumbling bricks and stuff like you have.) Also, if you are going to use the multicolored rooves, use them sparingly. Like dash a few of them into regular colored roofs and also 'reverse the colors' on them to make sure you don't get a pattern like you have here. I'm actually not a fan here, I think some solid oranges and reds would fit a lot better and reduce the 'pinkiness' of the screen. Also, add some roof details- windows sticking out, chimneys, decorations, etc. One last thing (I'm being nitpicky, but it'll help you improve!) I don't like the racks of items which are all the same color. I'd recommend dashing in different colors to make it more vibrant.

  • CorriIIo%s's Photo

    The ice cream thing is awesome!

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    great warm atmosphere.  very inviting.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    I love the planters and the atmosphere you've created.  Nice work on this area, I'm interested to see how you will make the transition to the rest of the work.

  • Austin55%s's Photo

    +1 on the roof colors, the same pattern repeating over and over is wierd. Easy fix there. 

     

    Also, are the windows top right accidentally painted black? Another quick thing to fix with the paintbrush.

     

    Overall this looks very nice. 

  • FredD%s's Photo
    I'll adjust the roofs and keep in mind the other feedback that was given. Not gonna change the texture though, it fits perfect with the theme.
  • CHE%s's Photo

    Nice warm atmosphere. Love the ice cream ruins.

  • Poke%s's Photo

    That ice cream looks awesome.

  • nin%s's Photo

    One day we'll have decently-sized beach towels. 

     

    Today is not that day.

  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Why is everyone on this beach alone (judging by the towels)? Consider adding some peep objects to the beach, making it seems more alive. The 1k sitting peep can work. Use some invisible path too.

    Lastly, lose the bottlenecks, because people are going to get killed in stampedes on a busy day.

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