Screenshot / Omega
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13-May 16
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Dude I fuckin wanna see more!!!
yeah you're definitely improving. its still a little weird/awkward in parts but the overall look is pretty nice.
You should try looking at real parks, I think it would help you immensely.
This is lovely. Really nice work!
Love the left top half of the screen. The water and the brick path add a lot of atmosphere. The other half of the screen is rather bland. Maybe it is due to unfinishedness? Otherwise, spice up the queue a bit and maybe add some trees or bushes to the grass field.
I agree with all of the above. Great screen with tons of potential, but still some room for improvement. The buildings and pats are great, the foliage is also really nice, but that grass field to the right seems a bit empty.
It's overall a good screen. The station is nice but the brown building after it is bit of an eyesore. Too big, too blocky and too brown. I'd delete it. Foliage is good, not a fan of the fence. Doesn't fit the theme. And I'd suggest another color for the coaster, the grey doesn't work for me.
Heres another view of the station FredD. Also the area is mild medieval theme, I didn't want to get too heavy into with too many castles because we all seen that and its quiet boring. I want it more of a village style.
Thought it would be the transfer track. I still think it curses too much with the station building, I would only place the spare tracks in the brown building.
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I got the weird feelings too but the more I built in the area, Its kinda coming together pretty well. I will show alot more finished stuff next screens.
Haha thank you scoop! =)
Yeah, as for the entrance of this park I took very minor features from Busch Gardens. But I'm trying to shy away from building from realistic stuff because its starting to bore me out and bring down the creativity in me. But as for rides and etc, I will keep looking.
Thanks Louis!
Yeah Unfinished didn't give this screen the punch I wanted but its all good, hopefully next screen. =)
Thanks! And will work on it =)
Can you message me a example of what you are particular referring too? I can get a better idea how to fix this.
There is something just simply pretty about this.
Go straight out of the station, don't dip.
Also the transfer track is close but the supports under the track behind it won't allow it to slide. Do something like this...
thanks bill, will do bro! I take anything to improve !