Screenshot / JWAK - Land of Origins

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Dope. Could do more with the texture work though (all the buildings are the same texture, add some brick), also probably shouldn't be (as much) grass by the cobra roll or first drop.

  • trav%s's Photo

    Really nicely done! I'd agree that a little bit more texture would take it to the next level. 

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    I love the Phantasialand inspiration.

  • Ekspert%s's Photo

    We need some baobab trees...

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo

    sexy coaster-path interaction.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Basically agreed with everything said about more texture. Looking great!

  • Steve%s's Photo
    Not bad at all! I would personally include more tall foliage near some of the architecture to the left of the screen to kind of give the simple buildings some nicer surroundings than just path (would also break things up and breathe a little). You're definitely improving though, foliage and paths are consistent now! :p I think once you nail your composition you'll be quite good.

    I don't quite understand the coaster. You have a rather huge first drop it seems and then you have the smaller loop/cobra roll following? And then that hill after the cobra is much taller than the inversions prior? Might just be the angle or just because we can't see all of it. How's the pacing?
  • RWE%s's Photo
    Great stuff, dude! There will never be enough Phantasialand inspired stuff on this site. Agree about the textures though.
  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Thanks erveyone for the replies! :)

     

    @Stoksy: I'll mix in some brick to add some variation. Thanks for the tip!

     

    @trav: glad you like it! Like I said I'll add in some texture.

     

    @Coasterbill: well spotted! Not that it was that difficult though. ;)

     

    @Ekspert: I actually have some, but I didn't use them as I think the textures don't match the game.

     

    @Yolo: That's something I really wanted and I think I made it work. Glad to hear you like it!

     

    @Coastercreator9: Thanks!

     

    @Steve: Don't worry, I've only shown the finished half. The left half of the village is still unfinished, so I'll be able to mix in some more foliage. Glad to hear you think I'm improving on it! It wasn't easy to find a balance between the "filler foliage" and the "themed foliage" from Africa but I think i pulled it off. The coaster is fine actually, good pacing all throughout the layout IMO. Fast where it should be and slower where it should be. Maybe it's just the angle?

     

    @RWE: Nver enough is my motto! Well, not really... :p But glad you like it!

     

    Happy to hear so many of you like this screen, makes me want to build some more on this. :)

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Never thought you would do THIS with that coaster you showed me. Jappy, for me, your best screen you showed on NE ever! Fantastic immersion of the coaster in the environment/zone, Great interaction. Archy is good too but I agree it needs more texture. 

  • WhosLeon%s's Photo

    v nice

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