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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Iron Rattler%s's Photo

    I think it could use a bit more color. It all seems very brown and green right now. I also think some of the trunk coloring is odd. The theme comes across very well though.

  • Austin55%s's Photo

    Use the flowers to inject some color splashes.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Change your tree trunk colors to the light brown please, all the different colors mess with my brain.

  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    Not a fan of the green roof at all, looks weird and blends too much with the foliage which itself needs a change of colour, in particular lighter trunks like G Force pointed out. Besides that the buildings look good, in particular the one on the right! 

  • MK98%s's Photo
    Allright, I hoped you'd like it better.
    I'll see what I can change.
  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    The building structures are pretty good. What is the theme exactly, though? Africa is huge. Like people already said, the tree trunks and flower beds need color changes. The light green benches have weird colors too. And I would change the umbrellas; they are too small and have horrible colors. Take this easy opportunity to add a splash of color to the screen! With some small changes this screen can easily go from 50% to at least 70%.

  • Julow%s's Photo

    Really nice work MK, really loving the terrace. I agree about the trunk coloring problem and maybe the flowers next to the path are a bit too repetitive. But the buildings are well done and detailed. :)

  • MK98%s's Photo

    Thanks for the comments. I changed some of the colors now. Bettah?

     

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    And about the theme.. well, I suppose it's South-African. But I'm thinking to adjust it with the surroundings and call it a Suriname-themed area. It's next to a Mexican GCI and a mine area.

  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Yeah it is slightly better, but the tree colors are still off. The foliage in general is kind of rushed compared to the architecture. There's no idea behind it.

     

    Have you ever been to South-Africa? Doesn't look like that at all. Nor like Suriname. It's better to choose a theme before building, instead of vice versa...

  • MK98%s's Photo
    Allright, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the comment though.
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    It's definitely better but that roof still doesn't look right in my eyes, I'd try a darker shade of brown, or maybe black or grey. The foliage would probably look better if you made it greener and more lush. There's maybe a few too many of those pine trees.

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