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29-April 17
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Coors Park
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Perspective on those blue/red/white/tan awnings is throwing me off a little. Seems too low from this angle (I'm sure it's perfectly fine though).
I honestly don't love this screen compared to everything else you've shown from this project. While the composition still seems great a lot of the object choice and the textures are extremely distracting.
I also can't work out what's going on with that roof/awning structure. Needs some verticals. Surely that brown roof that extends from the building is too low?
Rest is nice. I like the stepped paths a lot.
this looks great, reminds me of when i first come to ne and saw the different ways people were playing the game. this looks very origninal, keep up the good work
Not your best screen, but I think it's mostly a result of a bad screenshot choice. What's there is mostly path and some small parts of buildings and rides. I agree with the guys above about the awning things. They look weird. Also, the fence work could be a little bit more consistent. And the paths need more benches and bins for sure. Otherwise everything in there looks fine. I'd even say great.
It all looks rather clunky.
It's just so unbelievably messy. Can't even tell what's happening on the left side of the screen. Really poor colour choices too.
Those super big trees someone combined from LL shrubs never work. They hide everthing. I'd replace.
Awnings that Stoks and CC9 are the only thing that needs adjustment, seems way to over complicated for what they are.
Rest is nice really, I think this is just a bad angle... or rather it doesn't lend it self to screenshots very well.
Shotguns i used to love looking at your screens but lately its been clunky like everyone else said. Don't get me wrong, very great ideas and concepts in this ! Just a bit too much and not clean and simple.
Just to weigh in on this screen since it's getting mixed reviews.
First off, the stuff you've been doing lately has been fantastic, I've thoroughly enjoyed it. And what's here could be slightly improved (that "thing" on the left side of the screen for example), as with any screen. But you're simply not really showcasing anything interesting here, it's some pathways with some buildings on the outskirts and an unfinished station, so personally everyone's gripe is more due to poor choice of screenshot in my opinion. I'm sure this mixed in with the design, with the gallery of screens you've posted about this park, is great.
I'm super proud of you for not cropping the shit out of this
If you really want to make it look more indian, more native American... I'd paint everything in blue and white!
JK, great screen.
Cool screen. I would maybe change the colour of the pathing around the coaster station so everything doesn't blend into each other as much.
To be honest I don't understand half of the things in this screen. I'm divided because I don't know why you posted this, your other screens for this project are so clean and better. Probably not the best angle.
How should we know if you haven't shown us the updated area?
I think what your park and especially this section needs is just areas of nothing other than greenery. The central 'island' in this screen should be just green. Either forest, a grass field, or both. Whatever. No buildings, terraces or awning orgies.