Screenshot / teacups + fountain

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo

    Why is there a queue fence on the exit?

     

    All looks really good except for the flat ride, seems really sloppy and in combo with the queue fences a bit nonsensical.  Hope to see more.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    man this is a bit rough but i FUCKING love the composition man. keep up the great work and keep improving

  • Dombot%s's Photo

    That Schwarzkopf looks fucking awesome. 

  • alex%s's Photo

    I agree with Sammy. Great composition and I like the building forms a lot too. Also love the base of the flat ride and umbrella-like cover.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    gorgeous

  • Tom_Dj%s's Photo

    Really cool style. Fix the entrance buildings of the flat ride and you've got a great screen here.

  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    Along with others have said, consider a different color for that blue roof. Seems a little out of place right now. Otherwise, looking really good!

  • Poke%s's Photo

    i would get rid of those planters, they clog up the path. i also dont like the double track, just looks odd; doesnt add anything.

     

    also, the coaster support in the path at the bottom shows a bit of compositional weakness.

     

    i do like the colour scheme, all the peaches and pinks are very appealing.

     

    this screen has a lot of strengths tho, good job.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    I'd switch the flower colors and get rid of the queue rails on the exit but otherwise this is great.

  • roygbiv%s's Photo


    I'd switch the flower colors and get rid of the queue rails on the exit but otherwise this is great.

     

     

    Yeah, that is what I figured.

     

    It is still rough. I just wanted to know if the color choices are acceptable and that the varying fence types looked ok.

  • nin%s's Photo

    Please put something other than just dirt under the lift hill. The coaster looks great, but the bareness is killing it. I'm hoping it's just because it's unfinished.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    I agree with G_Force, Coasterbill, and Nin on their respective complaints. Other than that, it is rather amazing! 

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