Screenshot / Disney's California Bay

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • trav%s's Photo

    Some good stuff here. I don't think it's up to the level of something like DAW, but the overall atmosphere is great.

     

    I think the boat needs some work, as does the detailing at path level. Get rid of the deco trims around the road, replace them with the flat road lines. and I also feel like the road feels too thin in comparison to the scale of the buildings.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    I'll echo what trav said. It's nice and needs a little extra umph to push it - more elaborate docks, some interests along the path (vendors, more seating, etc.). I also get the feeling the buildings could use some more windows.

    Very nice start.
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Very cute; needs a little life - what are the buildings? No signage or other details tell me what's inside. I also echo what is said above as far as path details etc; excellent start.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    you're so close to developing your own style and being really, really good at the game.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Oh hey Pac.
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    I love the boat! I have to agree with CC9, in the likes that I would like to see some signage. Other than that, this is really rather lovely.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    I like what you did with the gravel retaining wall. that feels really real and i hadn't seen that before. other than that, yeah good- but done before!

  • Lotte%s's Photo

    So lovely, but maybe a bit empty somehow. peeps should do this wonders, but maybe try adding in some warmer colours along the path and the boats

  • posix%s's Photo


    you're so close to developing your own style and being really, really good at the game.

     
  • Mr.Brightside711%s's Photo

    You should change the palm tree trunks to grey instead of tan. 

  • RCT2day%s's Photo

    Stunning.  Love this so much.  A few things to think of:

     

    -Add some different supports like a truss or something to the bottom of that green railroad track

    -don't leave that rock hill like that, obviously

    -diagonal street lane dividers

    -put some other boat in between those two docks

    -needs peeps obviously

     

    85% from me

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