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  • 05-October 17
screen_4369 Española

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 7 years ago
  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo
    United States YoloSweggLord Offline

    This is actually pretty good for a new player. Welcome to NE!

    The rocks on the left and right side of the screen look a bit odd as that kind of object. There are several quarter tile rock objects available in most workbenches that Id recommend you use instead.

    posted 7 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Offline

    Nice job, great forms and placement of your buildings and rides.  Looking forward to seeing more from you.

    posted 7 years ago
  • Jappy%s's Photo
    Belgium Jappy Offline

    Very nicely done. Apart from changing those tan blocks with quarter tile rocks I don't have much advice. Welcome to the site and I hope to see more soon!

    posted 7 years ago
  • SimFox%s's Photo
    United States SimFox Offline
    I agree about the rocks. This was originally a timed thing, so when I realized I didn't have actual rocks I improvised...easy fix though. I'm also not in love with the coaster station building (specifically where the lift comes out of the roof), so I may play around with that also. Thank you all for the kind words!
    posted 7 years ago
  • Royr%s's Photo
    Austria Royr Offline

    Hey SimFox, nice to see you here on NE! Welcome :D

    posted 7 years ago
  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    United States Xeccah Offline

    looks a lot better than your lets play stuff. you need to really work on your ride design. don't be too ambitious and look at other designs to see what looks good on certain rides and what won't. you know how to detail well but some of your building forms are sketchy. stay to some more basic forms (2x2,2x3,1x3,2x4,"L"-shaped) especially with rooves. keep them in clusters and you'll go a long way.

    posted 7 years ago
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo
    Sweden mintliqueur Offline

    Actually really good! Nice retro vibe. 

    posted 7 years ago
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo
    United States BlazingEmpireHD Offline

    I find this rather well done, and it fits the bill well! 

     

    I am glad to see you finally onsite now! I am looking forward to more from you!

    posted 7 years ago
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    United Kingdom SSSammy Offline

    this looks interesting. welcome to the site! cant wait to see more from you

    posted 7 years ago
  • alex%s's Photo
    Netherlands alex Offline

    Great first screen, welcome!

    posted 7 years ago
  • saxman1089%s's Photo
    United States saxman1089 Offline

    Looking good, hope to keep seeing screens from you!

    posted 7 years ago

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