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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Poke%s's Photo

    I just wish this was more unified and refined in terms of textures and colours.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Did you post this on Discord? It looks familiar.

     

    I feel like it lacks some of the "theme park feel" - signs, path aspects, peeps... Obviously it's unfinished but it would help a lot.

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo
    Feels a bit plain but solid composition nonetheless. Redo the mixed cobble/lotr path, it's not mixed enough.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    Good stuff, really working the dutch colonial thing.  Those doorway textures are nice.  

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    I really, really like this, but I agree it needs more.....life. Gift racks, signposts, peeps....

  • ar2910%s's Photo
    This is a great mix of colonial and oriental architecture :) I agree though that it feels a little too... well ordered... for Jakarta. Some rounded paths and edges would help it all flow better IMO. Lovely work though, and I'd like to see more :D
  • Louis!%s's Photo

    love this, feels like such a good mix of textures and colours, its different, and i like it.

  • trav%s's Photo

    Looks great

  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    Glad to see you're working on SOA again. 

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    This is gorgeous. Easily the best screen from this project.

  • Dombot%s's Photo

    Best screen from you so far, I'd say. Getting SeaWorld vibes. 

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    I kinda get some Cocoa-vibes looking at this. Looks darn good boyo.
    Not sure if intentional, but there is a red arch piece missing.

    Great work, as usual.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    Definitely great work, but some of it still feels a little bit plain. Only a little bit, though. Keep up the great work!

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Did you post this on Discord? It looks familiar.
     
    I feel like it lacks some of the "theme park feel" - signs, path aspects, peeps... Obviously it's unfinished but it would help a lot.


    Agreed
  • alex%s's Photo

    I really love where you're going with this, it's just a tad lifeless atm.

  • Julow%s's Photo

    I have the same problem with this that I had with Coors. The archy is awesome but the foliage and landscape/relief makes it very difficult to read.

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