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screen_4641 Finna N. U. T.

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 6 years ago
  • IonZer0%s's Photo
    United States IonZer0 Offline

    Aannnd.  I'm missing walls.

     

    Pretend you see this instead.

    https://imgur.com/CrqTenp

    posted 6 years ago
  • WhosLeon%s's Photo
    Netherlands WhosLeon Offline

    Love the little path covers there. Great atmosphere!

    posted 6 years ago
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    United States CoasterCreator9 Offline

    The top half looks very nice, the bottom half (specifically the Chaos) kinda strays a bit into simplistic and less fitting architecture. It almost seems a bit unfinished. The rapids looks nice.

    posted 6 years ago
  • Lilith%s's Photo
    United States Lilith Offline
    very cozy. the little tower in the middle of the path looks nice.
    posted 6 years ago
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    United States Coasterbill Offline

    Very nice!

    posted 6 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline
    I like this but i think you made the roof situation too difficult for the building around the right tower. Try to stick to that one roof type you used elsewhere.
    posted 6 years ago
  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo
    United States YoloSweggLord Offline

    I love it! Nice coaster colors.

    posted 6 years ago
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    United Kingdom SSSammy Offline

    id get rid of the thatched houses in the roof, they aren't really adding anything. everything else looks snazzy! keep up the good work!

    posted 6 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    You should clean this up. No thatch roofs, reversed log banners, or trackitecture awnings. The trackitecture is the worst bit of the screen. If you cleaned this area up a little, and got rid of all these gimmicks in favour of things that actually fit in, this would be very nice. Right now it's nice.
    posted 6 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Offline

    Path is way too busy, simply your texture choice, especially when it comes to roofs like Liam said.  Some nice stuff but ultimately a bit messy and feels like you're a bit overwhelmed with the object selection.

    posted 6 years ago
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    United States ][ntamin22 Offline

    Good step forward in your CSO work.

    posted 6 years ago
  • Jappy%s's Photo
    Belgium Jappy Online

    Looking cozy and warm, has a great old school vibe to it. But I agree with Liam, get rid of the unnecessary track.

    posted 6 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline

    your best work

    posted 6 years ago
  • bigshootergill%s's Photo
    Canada bigshootergill Offline

    This is a really nice start, but it needs peeps and more finish (lamps, benches etc) and perhaps a little variation to the paths (maybe another planter or two).

    posted 6 years ago
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo
    Sweden mintliqueur Fan Offline

    Not sure about the red roof for the station, I'd use the same colour to tie the area together better. Aside from that, really, really good start here!

    posted 6 years ago
  • RWE%s's Photo
    Germany RWE Offline

    One can definitely see that you are playing a lot NCSO, those medival houses and the trackitecture doesn't work for me, otherwise great stuff! I really like your color choices and the station building!

    posted 6 years ago
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo
    United States BlazingEmpireHD Offline

    The trackitecture that goes across from one building to the centrepiece, to the other building, I'd keep. I agree with most others that the rest could be replaced with non-trackitectural forms.

     

    You've got nice work here. Keep it up! (or maybe not, since it'll be three months till we hear from you). ;)

    posted 6 years ago

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