Screenshot / Who wants some Perkins?

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Lilith%s's Photo
    glad to hear you got sponsored!
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    10/10 Great sign. lol

  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    This is cute. Keep up the grea work!
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo


    10/10 Great sign. lol

     

     

    ^ Agree

     

    I've not been the hugest fan of Perkins, but having been to one a couple times, it appears to me that this is just like one. Well done nailing the look!

     

    My only suggestion is to perhaps look into adding cars to the streets. It'd help the feel of it. 

     

    Good work, Sax!

  • csw%s's Photo

    I think there should be something to break up the transition from parking lot to retaining wall, perhaps more grass. 

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    you started to give this screen the amount of context and depth it needs, but you're definitely not done yet. i could put a 1-tile foliage buffer between the parking lot and the elevated road. it has fundamentals for being a great realistic scene but it's lacking that touch, those imperfections, that real life has. i think that goes for the park in general.

  • olddtfan51%s's Photo

    Very Nice.

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    I like the restaurant but the rest of the surrounds look rather bland and boring imo. I also agree with what others said about making a transition between the parking lot to the wall using either foliage or some grass.

  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    I think this is some great realism. The diagonal facade really makes this scene. I agree with Shotguns about adding foliage between the parking lot and the elevated road. I also think the pots used as ventilators (?) are not working well.

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Great screen, however I also follow Shogo. Placing extra foliage near that elevated road would really make this screen come alive.

  • saxman1089%s's Photo
    Thanks all! I already updated the area to include a strip of grass between the retaining wall and parking lot, and it helped a lot.

    As for some of the other real life imperfections and just details, really waiting on adding some of those until the park itself is a little more complete, for the sake of the object count.
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    Perkins is national? It's so shit i thought it had to be a one off thing.
  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    Perkins is national? It's so shit i thought it had to be a one off thing.

     

    Yep, this one was right down the street from my college, this screen is basically a semi-rec of that one. I never had a bad meal there, although it wasn't the best food I've eaten in my life. lol

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    i think you need some darker tarmac to break up some of this, other than that, it feels very real, surroundings could be awesome for you.

  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    What you guys think, better now? I think so.

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  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    Maybe it's just me, but it feels a bit tiny, no?

  • FredD%s's Photo

    The darked tarmac was a great tip from Louis. I'd expand the grass/foliage to one full tile and fill it even more with foliage. 

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Looks great now.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    much better

  • Description

    "Why eat expensive amusement park food when you can have some good old-fashioned down home country cooking, with fresh-baked desserts to boot?

    10% off your bill with a Steelworks Ticket"

    Thanks to Coasterbill for the sign over the entrance, since he's awesome and the master of sign making.

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