Screenshot / A bit of practice on the Pro Tour bench

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo

    Too much path.

  • nin%s's Photo
    Not bad, trav, not bad. The planters looks a little dated however.
  • Liampie%s's Photo

    I think it looks nice except for the yellow trees. Painful! Everything about the square could use some love. Path, planters, trees, et cetera.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    Very classic, and very quaint. I agree with Liam about the square, maybe a fountain?
  • trav%s's Photo

    Path/planters is definitely something that I need to work on, hopefully this H2H will give me someone to work with who excels at that and can give me some pointers on it. 

     

    Fountain is a very good idea, not sure why I didn't think of that sooner.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    this looks sick dude. i dont think there is too much path yet. us leeds bois need to have a meet up at some point

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    I love this. Perfect amount of path, imo! Keep it up!

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    I really love that line of three-ish buildings. Reminds me of old Steve or Turtle work, which is high praise! the planters/trees/paths could be a bit more interesting perhaps- its not the amount of path, but how you use it that determines whether its overwhelming and boring.

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    The "too much path"-issue could probably be solved by adding peeps, stalls, benches, light posts, bins, etc.
    Really like what is there so far.
    Good job.

  • Impulse%s's Photo

    Everything is good here, apart from the planters. They seem bare and a tad uninteresting, to be fair. Perhaps changing that wooden post fence for a different type of fence would work. Though, I like your archy a lot.

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