Screenshot / A Roaring Cascade

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Jappy%s's Photo

    OWO

     

     

    In all seriousness, I really like this screen. I really like the building, but be careful you're not adding too much trackitecture. I'd say the purple ghost train track is already too much.

     

    For the rest I'm looking forward to this. For the foliage, might I suggest some shrubs and grass, mixed with some Egyptian ruins as rocks?

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    cool stuff. I would get rid of the looping coaster track and change the color of the air powered track. keep it up.

  • Lilith%s's Photo

    cool archy and lovely colors! the foliage in the corner looks nice but the right side needs some landscaping details

     

    you could use plants or something on top of the trellis instead of looping track but that might be a little too messy still

  • Impulse%s's Photo

    It's nice, but it would benefit greatly from a little more foliage. Some bushes and small trees should do the trick. I'm also not sold on that latticework (the regular one should be just fine too) but it's definitely inventive.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    the building is quite nice. without context, the empty space looks just empty but possibly it fills a role in the greater scheme of things

  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    The purple accent is great and is needed. But the trackitecture itself feels forced. Maybe try another way to work that color in?

     

    Either way, this is fresh and I like it.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo

    excellent

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    that's a good-lookin' wooden

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo
    Nice work!
  • csw%s's Photo

    Nice stuff. Reminds me of some of the Vermillion screens. Don't listen to the haters, open space is awesome. 

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