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  • Recurious%s's Photo

    I like this, definitely has a bit of an old school vibe to it. Hope to see more.

  • Ling%s's Photo

    It looks very random. Comparably too many colors and too few textures. The path design also looks strange. I don't completely hate the idea of having these two textures together but maybe just use it to border the fountains or something, rather than having this switch from sort of matching the planter spacing on the way in to becoming the through-line to the park entrance. Either have it always be the through-line, i.e. the most direct path from map edge to the entrance so it makes a more obvious path for the eye to follow, OR make it part of the decoration which means it has to adhere to the set pieces like the planters or fountains.

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    Ling said well, I agree
  • Daoniyella%s's Photo

    Thanks for comments :)

    @Ling: Thank you for your suggestions. Now as you said it, i also see the weird path design ^^ I will definitily fix this. Also the problem with the colors are reasonable. I think i will get out the white and the purple color, do you think this could be helpful?

  • Ling%s's Photo

    Try picking a single color for the castle texture objects and a single highlight color, like the white or purple, and go from there.

  • MK98%s's Photo

    I like it, but I also agree with the colors. They're too random, especially on the roofs.

  • Daoniyella%s's Photo

    I've made some adjustments with the path, colors and foliage and added the buildings of other side :)

     

     

     

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  • Ling%s's Photo

    Path looks much better. Maybe one too many color still. I'd take the red out.

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