Screenshot / Wicked Twister & Swings

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  WhosLeon Online

  Damn, this is really nice! I do wish you had some more fullness and underbrush going on in the foilage.

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  Liampie Offline

  Yeah, this is nice work. Good to see you're working on the park again!

   

  I agree with Leon that the foliage could use some work. I generally advise against randomly scattered flowers

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  SSSammy Offline

  nice work! interested to see what you develop next. I agree with the other commenters, here's a little tut i did on foliage a little while ago which might help with how you think about foliage:

   

  https://www.youtube....h?v=3zJlKSSWiKA

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  In:Cities Offline

  I meant to comment on this yesterday, but I forgot haha.

   

  I love what you have so far! I do think that there are a couple small changes you can make to improve it a bit though.

   

  Like the others said with the foliage, it does need some work. a little underbrush in the large groups of trees would help, as well as some varying ground types. Try adding a few tiles of the grass/dirt landscape underneath some of the groups of trees. Also, the randomly scattered flowers are a little off-looking. I think you should look for more places to add the pink magnolia tree and change the color of the flowers to yellow/blue so that the pink of the trees will 'pop' out more. Don't be afraid to organize your flowers/foliage into more of an arrangement and neatly organized rows in some spots.

   

  All that said, this project looks fantastic so far. Looking forward to seeing what you do!

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  Jene Offline

  This is already looking really good. I like the building and the coaster. Great vibe you got going. I agree with what has been said about the foliage. I would put a little more TLC in the stones in the river and have another look at the traintrack crossing. 

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  i loved, nice work

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  Jak Offline

  nice work! interested to see what you develop next. I agree with the other commenters, here's a little tut i did on foliage a little while ago which might help with how you think about foliage:
   
  https://www.youtube....h?v=3zJlKSSWiKA
  

  
  Thanks for the tutorial, very helpful. And thanks all for the suggestions!

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