Screenshot / VA: Swallowtail Swing

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 5 years ago

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  Cocoa Offline

  I like that idea for the structure. But I think there's just too many colors and textures for me to handle in this screen, it makes all the details blur into infrastructure and vice versa

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  G Force Offline

  I think it's fantastic, probably the best screen yet for the project.

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  RCTER2 Offline

  I like this.

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  In:Cities Offline

  This is great.

   

  I do agree with cocoa in some regard - it could stand to be a bit more readable. I'd suggest getting rid of that black rock land texture behind the top of the ride so that the sphere doesn't blend with it at all. The red queues look nice on the upper level, but they look a little too busy on the bottom section.

   

  Very minor critiques though - this is awesome.

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  Lilith Fan Offline

  i think its readable enough other than the rock texture incities mentioned. the bright colors add a lot of life

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  posix Offline

  A very forced idea. The colourfulness alone though is an interesting look.

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  dr dirt Offline

  For me, screens of this project have been sort of hit or miss in many ways (may also be due to the varying states of finishedness?).. and this one is a hit.

   

  I think I mentioned it before but the big flower trees are iffy for me, mostly because it can potentially look flat.  I think the tidbit Liam mentioned in his rules thread about placing strategic objects behind or in front might be very useful here and make the trees look more 3D.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  gee! i loved

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  csw Offline

  Somehow I missed this - it's great. I think the flat could use a bit more space to breathe though. 

  posted 4 years ago

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