Screenshot / flume station

10 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    comment below
  • Fisch%s's Photo

    It's obviously very nice generally, but you're kind of inconsistent with the diameter of the wooden beams at use here. For example the wooden deck path along those diagonal arches really should get some beams under it, to make it feel well supported. At the same time the quarter tile corner post objects holding up the flat roof are far thinner, than the wooden beam on the edge of those flat rooves. Especially if you're not using any bracing for those supporting posts, they should probably be a bit thicker, while those beams on the edge of the flat rooves aren't really holding much weight.

     

    Aside of that, I like the shape, the colors, and the general design choices. It's cohesive, and certainly looks interesting!

  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    Roy i love this, but I agree with Fisch's feedback in a lot of ways. First big change I'd make would be to extend those thick wooden beams in the center of the screen all the way to the bottom ground level. The building is a little hard to read - by establishing a clear second level by extending the support, it makes it easier on the eyes right off the bat.

     

    I love the interactivity of the flume track itself, and the colors are very nice. Looking forward to more from you as always dude

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    thats pretty sick. very cool textures and layout

  • roygbiv%s's Photo

    ill thicken it up, was trying to keep it from being mess

  • Luketh%s's Photo

    Very unfinished, so hard to tell what you already know needs doing, like the queue stairs and changing land textures and adding foliage.

     

    Building looks really cool though, as does the coaster previously shown behind it. Now to fill in the little bits of life around these awesome, lively parts of your park.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    All the grey doesn't shout old west" to me.  The forms in the station are cool, and I really like the coaster action going on here.  All the bare dirt doesn't really work for me.

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    Roy I'm not an expert, but I learned a cool things here, and yes, your screen is good


    Note:
    In:Cities »» "but I agree with Fisch's feedback in a lot of ways. First big change I'd make would be to extend those thick wooden beams in the center of the screen all the way to the bottom ground level. The building is a little hard to read - by establishing a clear second level by extending the support, it makes it easier on the eyes right off the bat."

    I love the interactivity of the flume track itself, and the colors are very nice :)
  • Lilith%s's Photo

    i agree that grey roof and rocks arent really working

     

    the rmc looks so nice side friction track is a great choice

    i also love that there are ramps next to the stairs, accessibility is sexy

  • roygbiv%s's Photo
    I had the roof blue before but went with grey to make it look normal but I agree with it matching the rocks a little too much.

    Maybe will try something else
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Why the queues for individual rows? It's a log flume.

     

    Otherwise nice.

More By roygbiv

Similar Screens

Members Reading